|thoroughly enjoyed it but the chapters were a little long. Oh what am i saying!! I just envy you for being able to write so much!! *laughs* |
Its good that Legolas survived! What would we do without him eh? Fall into darkness i say!
And of course trusty Estel, whom i always call Estel now that i discovered that is what Lord Elrond called him.
And rightly so.
He really is Middle Earth's Hope. Literally.
That was really good writing i must say. Every time i write i'm like "Is that too much? Too much description? Too little?"
oh i'm a nightmare! but don't worry about me.
Ten out of ten!
Hm - you know, I posted this story on ff.net in six chapters, and here in two to see what I and the readers would like better. I think I like the six-chapter-version better, too. Perhaps I'll change it, just have to find out how...
I really like Legolas to survive, too! Well, I like both of them to survive - I really need them for my stories, after all. ;-)
I think "Estel"/Hope is Aragorn's truest name. :)
Thank you, I'm glad you like my writing! I think everyone has her/his own problems with writing style and writing - I had to struggle a lot with most of my stories. :P The most important thing seems to be not to give up (as difficult as that can be).
Thank you very much for another review! :)