Melissa02/02/08 07:04 am5: Chapter 5Anonymous

hello, i have written before. this is my second time reading your story so obviously its good... there is one thing that i would really appreciate if you would change and that is about the swears... please don't swear... im a christian and i find it disrespectful, nonetheless, your story is very wonderful :)

 



Author's Response:

Hello!

Thank you for your review. I am glad that you like it. About the swears, I can imagine that some people do not like them, but I think in a world as ME, which is quite comparable to our Middle ages, swears belonged to dayly life. But rest assured, I think I used them less in my other stories. ;)


Melissa02/02/08 06:20 am19: Chapter 19Anonymous

Hi, I just wanted to let you know that i really loved your story. it was exciting and intense, full of emotion and compassion and love... i should like to read more of your work. you are very talented indeed!

Jesus loves you very much!

~ melissa :)  


sushi12/03/06 01:46 pm19: Chapter 19Anonymous

Wow!!!!

That was sooooooooo amazing. Pleeeeeeeeease write another story soon?!?!?!?



Author's Response: Thanks! Well, if you liked that, you could read the sequel *The Roots of Evil*. *g*

Michelle09/13/05 01:34 pm19: Chapter 19Signed
I *finally* had the time to read the story. And man, was it an angsty ride. Especially for poor Aragorn. You really didn't give him a moment's rest:) I loved his interactions with Taran and the baby itself. It sure was a very intelligent and lovable baby *hugs Taran*!

I wonder if it's possible to write any angstier than this and what you'll come up with in your next story! Reading this one I was constantly at the edge of my seat, biting my nails, shouting at the characters:) It was a real pageturner!


Thorongirl07/22/05 05:47 pm6: Chapter 6Signed

I read this in about ten minutes and of course, it was ten minutes well spent. Ah, so Legolas is going to listen to the fanfic readers angst muses and disobey Lord Elrond? If he can take the next step, that is. Nice background information on Dagnir and I continue to enjoy the interaction between Estel and Taran.  Very interesting. A short review, sorry, but I have to get back to Real Life now. BTW, the beta work was very good. Only glitch I noticed was the use of "loose" when it should be "lose". My big problem is punctuation. I'm never quite sure where to put those quotation marks. I'm anxious for your next chapter, although it might be Monday before I can read it.

Author's Response:

Hy!

Thanks for the reply. Aye, I thought it was time to give more information about the cause of the kidnapping. And, of course our Mirkwood friend is naughty and does not what he has been told.

Many thanks again, hope you like the next chapter.

Imaginigma


imaginigma07/22/05 04:59 pm1: Chapter 1Signed
Hi!

Thanks for your reply, it means a lot to me. I hope the rest of the story suits you, too. have fun with it, Imaginigma


Thorongirl07/22/05 04:39 pm1: Chapter 1Signed
It's hard to believe this is your first LOTR fic. It is a great read and I have enjoyed it immensely. I especialy liked the interaction between Aragorn and the baby. Too sweet. Also gave the impression of some very befuddled elves in that part, so it was funny. And of course, the prerequisite bad guy is oh so charming. (Not that I would have it any other way).  Glad to see you're posting somewhere besides the list. More people need to appreciate your work. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Hi!
thank you very much for your reply, it means much to me. I hope you enjoy the next chapters, too.
imaginigma


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