Ah, I like this very much! It is very like the stories on Lang's Fairy Books, where the daughter liked her love for her father to salt. Except this is much better! I always thought that the silly papas were quite foolish for being insulted at that. Your story is more like how they should have ended!
Author's Response: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.Yes, I know the story about the salt.I'm delighted you enjoyed my story | 