Thank you very much for the 4. chapter, this is getting better and better. This is very well written again, I could almost see Menelris and her gentle, motherly (?) loving care for Strider or Thorongil touched me deep. I'm glad the droop is gone and he's doing better, at least the wound is looking better. And the title of the chapter is fantastic, although you have to read it first to understand, I liked it very much.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, the droop is gone, and with it at least a few of Gandalf's worries. :) I'm glad you like the idea of a motherly Eagle... and the chapter title, yes, definitely chosen to draw a reader in by making them wonder what in the world that phrase means! Thanks for the review! |