Michelle02/24/11 01:01 am4: Chapter 4 - A Bit Feeble In The FeathersSigned

Oh, I'm quite charmed by Menelris already! She's quite intriguing - all that knowledge, she's not supposed to have:) She even surprised Gandalf with that and I guess not much surprises a wizard!

I'm really liking this story *sighs happily*.



Author's Response:

Yay!  I like it when I hear a reader sigh happily. *g*   But thank you... I'm also very glad you like Menelris.  I figure the Eagles, at least the northern ones that have the strong connection with Manwe, would know a lot about what goes on in Middle-earth.  You can learn a lot from observation.  And since they keep to themselves for the most part, no one really has much clue what they might know or not know, so yes, it's a surprise to Gandalf the extent of the details she's figured out.  I have to say, I really found studying Tolkien's Eagles to be a fascinating topic. :)


Anonymous01/10/11 11:24 pm4: Chapter 4 - A Bit Feeble In The FeathersAnonymous

Thank you very much for the 4. chapter, this is getting better and better. This is very well written again, I could almost see Menelris and her gentle, motherly (?) loving care for Strider or Thorongil touched me deep. I'm glad the droop is gone and he's doing better, at least the wound is looking better. And the title of the chapter is fantastic, although you have to read it first to understand, I liked it very much.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Yes, the droop is gone, and with it at least a few of Gandalf's worries. :)   I'm glad you like the idea of a motherly Eagle... and the chapter title, yes, definitely chosen to draw a reader in by making them wonder what in the world that phrase means!   Thanks for the review!


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