Michelle05/05/09 12:03 am6: Chapter 5 - To Save One SoulSigned
Is it your plan to make me depressed? You really want to convince Aragorn that there is no hope or silver lining, don't you? Nothing is going as it should for them and I fear things won't look up any time soon:(

Author's Response: hee hee!  Nope, not depressed but just very concerned and empathetic for our poor Rangers and especially Aragorn. :)  And of course to underscore just how evil things were and how hard a road Aragorn had to travel.  Things definitely are getting bleak, aren't they.  Thanks for the review!

Mirach04/30/09 12:17 am6: Chapter 5 - To Save One SoulSigned

All the suspense... and then this! That's so sad...

I like that you gave Aragorn's companions background and personality, a few chapters and I'll remember their names ;) Denlad, Eledh... hm... next time, maybe :)



Author's Response: Thank you, Mirach!  I like to use original characters and make them as real and three-dimensional as possible, so I'm glad you like them.  Yes, the names are a little tricky, but you've about got it! :)

Eli and Roisin02/07/09 06:56 pm6: Chapter 5 - To Save One SoulAnonymous
Roisin and I both agree this chapter was very moving. We both feel for Aragorn. I know I can relate to his pain as a nurse. Roisin and I are enjoying this story very much. Roisin says again she loves all the showing.

Author's Response: Thank you!  This one was another difficult one to write... a bit of my own experiences waaaaay back in the day when I helped with a search & rescue that didn't go the way we wanted was a bit of the basis for the emotions I wrote into this.  It's so hard to *not* be able to effect a rescue when you so desperately want to.  I wanted to show that in Aragorn's experience. 

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