Amarok04/04/10 06:18 pm: Cold ComfortSigned

Aw..., a nice and sweet (oh well, as sweet as a puking can be made, that is) story. I liked it, especially Aragorn calming Legolas, that he will not die from this illness (even if he might feel as if ;-) ).


Tari Surion01/29/08 10:14 pm: Childhood FearsAnonymous
I thought this was a great story.  I love the way you write. Little Aragorn is so cute. I like the drama & the friendship in this story. It's absolutely wonderful.

Fishpaste11/22/07 07:57 pm: Blood of a Brother: Tried and TrueAnonymous

Poor poor Aragorn, learning your the heir to someone you look down upon cant be easy.

A really good read, very deep in places.


Eleiel11/05/07 07:31 pm: Stars and DangerSigned

Words escape me! the end was perfict, the begining was amazing, all together a exelent story. I really like the how the orks taunted them, I alawys enjoyed writing things like that, and reading them!


Anonymous06/16/07 11:11 pm: Shattered DreamsAnonymous

OMG you are such an awesome author I bow in your presence...ok.....maybe that was a little much, but really, you really are a great writer. You are simply phenomenal....please continue writing.

 RACHEL



Author's Response: *blush* thankyou.  I know I haven't added any new stories for a while, but there are several in progress.

Legs1801/04/07 12:35 am: Shattered HopeAnonymous
    I have enjoyed this story immensly so far, but I feel that this chapter echoes what I have felt all along: that Estel cannot be six years old. Even in middle earth, raised by elves, with a tragic childhood, a six year would not understand half of what is going on and would defnitely not respond as Estel did. Even 10 years would be stretching it, although that would be more believable.


Author's Response:

I am sorry you didn't like the way I have portrayed little Estel, but I have to wonder; if you don't like my writing why do you read it?

This incident is actually based on an encounter someone I am very privileged to know had with his very young son. While I concede that with most children and most families it is out of the realms of possibility; if such encounters are possible in our world then I would expect that such would be possible when it involves one such as Estel, with his abilities, his heritage and his elven family.


lindahoyland12/05/06 06:17 am: UnexpectedSigned
A very sweet story

Author's Response: Thankyou *smile*

Lily Baggins (lilybaggins@hotmail.com)11/21/06 07:06 am: Cold ComfortAnonymous

I adored this! There are too few fics that feature Aragorn out in the wilds and sick from illness, not injury. The comfort was lovely---I have quite a weakness for Aragorn vomiting or otherwise suffering from a humiliating human symptom around elves!

I would beg for a sequel, I would... perhaps a relapse? :D



Author's Response:

glad you liked it *smile*

while there isn't a sequal I do have a story (partially written at the moment) set immediately after this one.

- ElenaRoan


Elemmire11/18/06 04:15 pm: EnchantedSigned

Hey, that was pretty clever. Not amazing, but clever. I enjoyed it. I don't know what else to say, which is a surprising thing for me. Good job.

Elemmire 


Elemmire11/16/06 06:46 pm: Cold ComfortSigned
Cute. Simple, not over dramatic, not perfect, just cute. I think this may be the best of your writing yet. It would be nice for you to add translations, I am figuring "Goheno nin" is "Forgive me", but I'm not sure. I know "Hannon le", but I am sure not everyone who reads this will.


Author's Response: take a look at the elvish, you'll notice it's actually a link.  Hover over that link and there will be a small translation appear, like what you get when you hover over a picture.

Elemmire11/09/06 11:47 pm: Bad News Travels FastSigned

That was a nice, if rather brief, look at how Legolas mets Estel(bravo for not killing Gilraen!). I liked the "Will he be safe?" "Legolas?" "Estel." (It has to be the cutest picture! I have a brother that young!) As you didn't make any reference to the caves, or much of the Palace itself, I see little reason to warn someone that you may not see it as they. But in point of fact, though your puzzling over the Mirkwood caves has some logic, I think we need to think in terms of Race and life. Moria is dank, dark, filled with emptiness and fear, and loneliness as Legolas is used to that of (with lack of a better word) homeliness. I see Mirkwood's Caves as a wondrous spark of life- even if a little dim. In The Hobbit, it seems a delightful, if slightly saddened, place to live! It matches the trees. Tolkien said in The Hobbit in chapter 9, 'Barrels Out of Bond': "These were not like those of the goblin-cities; they were smaller, less deep underground, and filled with a cleaner air. In a great hall with pillars hewn out of the living stone sat the Elvenking..." And the Elves there- whee! Barrels and wine! I hope this wasn't insulting, I was just sharing my point of view. Over all, great short story!

~ Elemmire Star-Sheen


Eleiel11/03/06 08:10 pm: Small Dark SpacesSigned

awww! I love sotries about small children, almost as mush as I love the children them selves.

I would be wonderfull if you wrote anothering thing like this except longer.

Thanks for posting this! I hope that is the right word. lol :P

Eleiel



Author's Response: glad you like it so much *grin* this story was my first piece of fanfiction I wrote *smile*

Eleiel10/27/06 10:16 pm: Shattered HopeSigned

A pleasing ending to a sad, that is melencholy, begining. It is another masterfull peice of story telling. I would evy you, but I would probably spend all my time wrtting and none doing my school.

An a Eru

Eleiel



Author's Response: school comes first *smile* but writing can be a very enjoyable hobby *grin* I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Eleiel10/27/06 10:07 pm: Shattered HopeSigned

I have always wondered what elves did with ork bodies. i dint think they would bury them. Would they burn them like the Rohirim did? It is just one of those silly unanswerd questions that are so unimportant, yet bugs to to death.

Oh, and i dont think the twins would cry. i dont know what they would do, but somehow crying just doesn't fit. But perhaps it is the only solution. never the less, in is en excelent chapter, I enjoyed it very much.



Author's Response:

I think it would depend on the situation and location.  In Mirkwood they would probably just leave them where they fell, the spiders would clean them up and they could neither risk the time to take care of it or a fire in the forest.  Rivendell probably handles them differently, the twins quite possibly just leave them; to bother with them would be to give them a measure of respect.  Other's from Rivendell likely have different approaches, I have a feeling Glorfindel would insist on doing something.

All I can really say is my view on it, which may or may not be right.  Sometimes exactly what someone is least likely to do is the one thing most needed.  The twins hadn't dealt with their grief ever, they'd been sitting on it for centuries.  It had to come out or it would eventually destroy them, and tears wrung from someone who doesn't cry are more healing then otherwise.

I'm glad you enjoyed it *smile*


Eleiel10/27/06 09:53 pm: Shattered HopeSigned

heehee, that is rather funny! Of course O would do the same thing if I was in the same place as the Captain, but since I am not I can snicker at him *sncker,snicker*

I bet yor pardon if that sounds strange to you, but I have a srange sense of humor.



Author's Response: I have a strange sense of humour too *grin*

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